守得莲开结伴游，约开萍叶上兰舟。来时浦口云随棹，采罢江边月满楼。
花不语，水空流，年年拚得为花愁。明朝万一西风动，争向朱颜不耐秋。
此为HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲词。全词不着重HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiolian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>写莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花或HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/nuzi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>女子的外表美，而着重写HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲的环境美和HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲女的心灵美。整首词兼具HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/minge/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>民歌的清新明净和文人词的隽雅含蓄，别具情韵而又楚楚动人。上片起首两句写一群HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/nuzi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>女子为了HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲，长时期地等候莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花盛开，莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花开了，她们便结伴去采；湖塘里长满浮萍，她们要上船，得先轻轻地把它拨开。这两句写出了姑娘们莲开前的耐心等待、HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲前的细致动作。
“来时浦口云随棹，采罢HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/jiangbian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>江边月河楼”，则写她们的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲过程、HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲环境。HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiatian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>夏天白昼云雾少，句中的“云”，当指晓云。这两句写的是HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲人到了浦口，晓日初升，尚未消散的云气笼罩她们船棹周围；她们HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲休工回到HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/jiangbian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>江边，夜月已上，人家的楼台上已照满HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yueguang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>月光。作者把这从早到晚地HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/laodong/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>劳动写得很HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/youmoi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>优美。过片以后展示HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/nuzi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>女子心灵的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/moihao/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>美好。她们爱惜莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花，为莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/zaoyu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>遭遇担忧。或许她们HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲中，也从莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花身上看到自己的影子。
“HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花不语，水空流”，好HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花无语，流水无情，深情无法倾诉，好景不断流逝，人无可奈何，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花也无可奈何，那就只有“年年拚得为HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花愁”了。而最急迫的愁是“明朝万一西HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风动，争奈朱颜不耐秋。”怕万一西HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风聚然吹来，艳丽的莲HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花抵挡不住，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/ma/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>马上就陷于飘零、憔悴。“朱颜”指HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花，用比拟写法进一步人HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花合一了。此片细腻地写出HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/cailian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>采莲人多情易感的内心世界。