念奴娇·西湖雨感次素庵韵

　　此词为作者夫妇寓居HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xihu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>西湖时因HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨有感而作。词的开篇即从HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨写起，“HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨窗闲话，叹浮生何必，是今非昨”，小窗外，细HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨淅沥，珠帘内夫妇对坐，闲话中谈及如烟HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/wangshi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>往事，夫妇二人禁不住顿生今是昨非之叹。接着的“几遍青HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山酬对好，依旧黛眉当阁”句，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xieren/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>写人HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiejing/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>写景，表达对大HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/ziran/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>自然的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiai/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>喜爱。多少次夫妇面对青HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山诗词HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/changhe/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>唱和，到而今细HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨迷蒙中，青HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山依旧，黛眉依扣，只是空去了如烟的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/wangshi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>往事。“洒道轮香，润HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花杯满，不似前秋恶”，仍写HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨，只因有了这宜人的细HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨，这个HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/qiutian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>秋天同去年相比，也变的美丽起来。字词行间透露出对这HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨中HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xihu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>西湖的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiai/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>喜爱之情。而“不似前秋恶”一句，更是语直意显，直吐出作者对HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨中今秋的好感。上片末二句“绣帘才卷，一楼空翠回薄”，名为写帘、写楼，实则仍是写HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨，绣帘高高挑起，满HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山满湖回旋的青翠仿佛染绿了楼宇，使得它空翠之色顿生。于是词人也便有了下片纵情HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shanshui/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山水的念头。过片后，首三句：“拟泛烟中片叶，但两湖佳处，任HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风吹泊”。在烟HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨蒙蒙中，词人只想乘一叶小舟，让HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风儿吹着那只孤舟，游遍HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xihu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>西湖的每一处胜景。“HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shanshui/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山水清音听未了，隐岸玉筝金索”让词人HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/liulian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>留恋不已的不仅是那绵绵不绝的清越的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shanshui/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山水之音还有邈远的岸边传来的隐约的古筝之声。其下三句“头上催诗，枕边滴梦，谩惜瑶卮落”词人由HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨而生发HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/gankai/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>感慨。催发诗兴的是那头顶上不断飘落的如丝细HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨，引人入梦的也是那枕边不断滴落的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨丝，手举玉杯，词人禁不住空自蹉叹。“相看不厌，两高天际孤削”，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xieren/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>写人与HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山的契合。远远抛，两座高峰巍然耸立，直插云霄。词人的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/qinghuai/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>情怀在与HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/ziran/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>自然的对视中得到了慰藉。