鹧鸪天·赏荷

　　这首咏荷词描写的初秋时节，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/huanghun/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>黄昏HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yuexia/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>月下的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hetang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷塘HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yuese/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>月色。HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yuexia/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>月下HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hetang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷塘，清虚骚雅，暗香袭人，天光云影间，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山容水态貌给人一种幽静温馨的氛围。

　　全词运笔极有层次。先写出了HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hetang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷塘的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/zongti/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>总体HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风貌，“秀樾横塘十里香，水HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花晚色静年芳。”“秀樾”指稀疏的树影，“水HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花”则是指水中的荷HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花。清秀稀疏的树影环绕着十里横塘，入晚的荷芳幽静独立散发着芳香。此句在用杜甫《曲江对HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yu/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雨》诗中“城上春云覆苑墙，江亭晚色静年芳”，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hetang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷塘HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/moijing/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>美景不禁让人留连HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/bushe/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>不舍。“胭脂HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xue/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雪瘦熏沉水，翡翠盘高走夜光。”这句拉近了人们的视野，由远及近。写水中荷HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花，写HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花下HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/heye/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷叶。“胭脂HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xue/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雪”，苏有诗云“卧闻HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/haitang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>海棠HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花，泥污燕脂HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xue/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>雪。”意红白相杂之色。“沉水”即沉香，闺房熏用。“夜光”借指HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/heye/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷叶上滚动的水珠。荷HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花飘香，水珠着色，不由使人HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/xiangwang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>向往如这般皎洁秀美的姑娘。这为上片。

　　下片则立意颇新，拉开镜头。写水边群HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山，写荷上HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/mingyue/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>明月，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山黛空蒙，月波流转，倒蘸波间，融成一个清幽朦胧的境界。“HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山黛远，月波长，暮云秋影蘸潇湘。”黄庭坚有《西江月》，曰：“远HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山横黛蘸秋波”似与此HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/tongqing/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>同情。不由使人觉之“HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山眉水目，顾盼含情”的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/nuzi/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>女子袅袅出现。“醉魂应逐凌波梦，分付西HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风此夜凉。”荷HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花又称为凌波仙子，语出曹植《洛神赋》，“灼若芙蓉出绿波，”“凌波微步，罗袜生尘，”故得名。面对荷HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hua/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>花香艳，凉夜清HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风的HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/moijing/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>美景，作者不由发概叹，良宵HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/moijing/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>美景君应赏，别负HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/qingchun/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>青春美HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shaonian/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>少年。　

　　这首赏荷词，词HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/feng/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>风清韵，如HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/yuexia/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>月下HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/hetang/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>荷塘，清新雅舒，暗香袭人。赏荷而不仅见荷，天光云影，HRef=https://www.qijian.info/list/shan/ target=_blank class=infotextkey>山容水态皆入眼帘，而处处都烘托出一种赏荷时的恬淡温馨的气氛。遣词造句中，精挑细拣，“秀、静、瘦、远”字字含情。有人谓“莲体实肥，不宜言瘦”，（王若虚《滹南诗话》）并尝易“腻”字，意虽同物，而词境界全无。